Here's the prompt again:
Write a flash fiction in 200 words or less, using the phrase: the sky darkened.
For an added challenge, include a sound that surprises one of your characters and a foul smell.
For my entry I used characters from my YA fantasy WIP, currently called The Hidden Truth.
Here it is at 200 words exactly:
The sky darkened and only the silver light of our two moons illuminated the river ahead. Beneath us the ground trembled and pits of boiling mud splattered their contents like an artist throwing paint on canvas.
"Is this it?" I asked.
"Legend says, 'Find what you seek where the boiling river fans the flames .' Here's the river," Shen said his green eyes meeting mine.
"That doesn't make any sense," Sanjo said. "Water puts out fires."
Ignoring Sanjo, I gazed at Shen, I could get lost in his eyes. "Do you think this will work?"
"It has to," he replied.
"I’m not sure I believe the legends."
"We have to try, Nakyte." His hand brushed my cheek, "there is too much at stake."
"Guys, I hate to interrupt but do you smell that?" Sanjo asked.
"Sulphur," I said, it's acrid stench burned my nose.
A sudden explosion burst from the river and threw me to the ground. I looked up and my jaw dropped open. Boiling liquid spewed from the river like a geyser and singed the trees above it. Their dark green leaves edged in golden flame."This is it," said Shen. "This is where we'll find the key."
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